tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5614023604859707054.post745020435455878763..comments2023-09-23T09:33:38.344-04:00Comments on Deconstructing Dena: What is going on?!?!Dhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15558857438868245981noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5614023604859707054.post-44409283789587397042010-02-09T23:17:48.310-05:002010-02-09T23:17:48.310-05:00Yes, I think any good PB needs a nice rhythm. &qu...Yes, I think any good PB needs a nice rhythm. "Sally Circle" is one of those rare instances where the story is actually enhanced by the rhyme. Must remember to never get myself into this situation again! :pDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15558857438868245981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5614023604859707054.post-16642233227709839202010-02-09T22:02:20.161-05:002010-02-09T22:02:20.161-05:00I think rhythm and rhyme are two totally different...I think rhythm and rhyme are two totally different things. While poetry can be cute and endearing, a similar effect can be created just by writing prose and/or just plain, old-fashioned well-chosen words.<<<<that's what we do with all of our stories anyway, right?<br /><br />I think you were brave to even attempt rhyming in the first place. Me, never. Maybe someday when I have a well-versed collaborator ;)<br /><br />Oh, about the followers, I have a tendency to be persuasive, glad a few popped over!Jonathon Arntsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17366218140886892757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5614023604859707054.post-74039664182510294482010-02-09T20:12:35.333-05:002010-02-09T20:12:35.333-05:00Oh believe me... I've already joined you in po...Oh believe me... I've already joined you in poetic hell... I have absolutely no idea how to fix my disaster of a meter-less poem!<br /><br />But YAY for you!! I'm so glad it all clicked for you Dena! Sally Circle is adorable and I can't wait to see where it goes!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03733854662944058955noreply@blogger.com